Feel Me
It started out as a friendship
when I fell in-love for the first time,
The look of her eyes was so sweet
her angelic face made my heart beat.
I tried to win her heart
but her anger was the reward,
I know I did the wrong thing
but I just followed what my heart was commanding.
I fell in-love again
and it was the second time around,
I was afraid to make the same mistake
for this time my mind and heart are at stake.
I have to let this feeling pass away
rather than to break my heart on what she's going to say,
I hope one day this feeling will end
to make this anxiety mend.
I fell in-love again
and it was the third time,
I don't know why it is coming back
like I was in a crossroad looking for a path.
It is so hard when cupids are playing like this
I wish God would change this sadness into bliss,
I'm so tired of keeping love alive
so tired of hiding those feelings inside.
From this moment I have to stop these stupidities
and live a life full of humilities,
I know you are the only one who could help me this time
because I'm in-love with you right now... for the fourth time.
when I fell in-love for the first time,
The look of her eyes was so sweet
her angelic face made my heart beat.
I tried to win her heart
but her anger was the reward,
I know I did the wrong thing
but I just followed what my heart was commanding.
I fell in-love again
and it was the second time around,
I was afraid to make the same mistake
for this time my mind and heart are at stake.
I have to let this feeling pass away
rather than to break my heart on what she's going to say,
I hope one day this feeling will end
to make this anxiety mend.
I fell in-love again
and it was the third time,
I don't know why it is coming back
like I was in a crossroad looking for a path.
It is so hard when cupids are playing like this
I wish God would change this sadness into bliss,
I'm so tired of keeping love alive
so tired of hiding those feelings inside.
From this moment I have to stop these stupidities
and live a life full of humilities,
I know you are the only one who could help me this time
because I'm in-love with you right now... for the fourth time.
I like the poem, but I honestly think that it needs a little more work.Don't take it personal, just a word of advice from someone who is practicing to become a write or poet someday.The concept is nice though.Thanks for explaining how guys may feel at times.