Vote For Poetry

Hi Shawnnatta!  I enjoyed reading your poem.  I am poetess too!  I welcome you to read some of my poems.  Of course I write a lot!  I a published poet with 3 books of poetry.  I thought your poem was original, and very deep and thought provoking.  If I am partically correct you are saying in your poem that your brother or (the personna's brother) was killed in a war and this is the reaction of the main character.  This is what I understood to be the reflections of thoughts in your words of expression.  I could be wrong though, but I read it twice and I rated you a 5!  It's deeply moving and impressive.    To read some of  my work you can find me on the blackhistoy pages under WINNIESPOETRY or you can visit me on the web pages online by just typing in the word:  WINNIESPOETRY  and select from one of pages to read.  I have lots.  I write prophecy poetry too so it's scary to some people. I don't want to frighten you.  I know some people are terrified of poetry mentioning prophecy and doom.  But they forget the doom is only for the wicked and ungodly people.  Not people who follow God.   Enough for now take care.
Great job!
MIISRAEL