A new poem what u think?

You cut me deep
Deep like surgery
Cant believe i let you worry me

What Because I'm a man
You think that u leaving me
Aint hurting me
But I'm getting better "B"

Thing's are starting to look up
Anyday now i could hook up
And be over you
Now i see how it is to be sober boo
Because you had me drunk
Drunk with love

I can admit i miss your kisses and your hug's
You had me hook like drug's

I dont know cuz
Can i really move on
What i had for her was so strong
Make me feel like a lung is gone
Chest get tight
But my boy's tell me
That it's gone be all right
Is that true?
Or will I be forever miss you?