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First Time

LaShonda Redd · Thursday, July 21st 2005 at 3:13PM · 142 views
I thought since everyone else was posting a little poetry i thought i would put a little of my skillz on here too. First time is what the poem is called, tell me what ya'll think.

The words ring in her ears over and over again/ She knows its wrong to fornicate, she knows its a sin/ But she deeply wants to be loved and touched/ Feeling the friction within her thighs, oh did i mention the feeling of lust./ To gently feel the head slide smoothly into her walls/ he leans closer to go deeper and his name she calls.

He reaches deep within her soul and pulls out whats left, bringing her to her first climax/ Not knowing her pride and self- esteem is now cracked./ To pieces, shattered with just one moan./ He didn't plan to resign with her, she didn't know she'd be on her own./ To remember the sweet memory of what was left./ Of what she knows now was a smooth theft./ Of her innocents and her new found love, He told her it would be special thats why he didn't wear a glove. Her first time.

Tell me what ya think.

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Comments (5)

Candace Michelle Thursday, July 21st 2005 at 4:24PM

That was deep...

Kermisha Glasgow Thursday, July 21st 2005 at 4:58PM

I like that...that was real deep

Connie Williams Thursday, July 21st 2005 at 7:09PM

That was so real and deep. I cannot realize until now how that happens so much. It gives you something to think about.

Connie Williams Thursday, July 21st 2005 at 7:10PM

That was so real and deep. Idid not realize until now how that happens so much. It gives you something to think about.

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Whitney P Thursday, July 21st 2005 at 7:50PM

That was profound. I don't know what more to say.

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