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Exotic... Divine... Emotion...

Exotic... Divine... Emotion...

Kenneth Goens · Tuesday, February 28th 2006 at 1:35AM · 492 views
This is a poem I wrote about 2-years ago, I'm currently working on another, but it seems to be taking me some time to write...Read this and give me some feed back on it, or tell hw this could possibly elate to you...

Emotions that held from the world. Feelings that are bound, and weld shut away from all anxiety. Passionate thoughts of overcoming her thresh holding paradise of affection, while elevating our minds both mentally and physically to a new level of understanding…

Vivid visions of anticipation. Not knowing what to do in her presence. She speaks with the adolescence of a child who wishes to walk but yet can crawl.

And to feel her soft luxurious silky cream skin touch mine is a dream within it self, for this girl that I speak of is a gift of GOD planted on this Earth to bring forth good fruit, and not for the leisure of mine…

So as life goes on, so will she, along with the admirations for life it self, to blow in the wind, like beautiful white roses in the Sahara East.

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Kenneth Goens Chicago, IL

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Shonte Murray Tuesday, February 28th 2006 at 1:51PM

I really like that poem that u wrote, it is very exotic, and interesting. What other things do u write about because that was beautiful. You should be a poet.

Kenneth Goens Wednesday, March 1st 2006 at 5:06PM

when I wrote this. yes I was dating some one at the time. and I was in love... But over time that same love tends to fade away...
As far as other poems, I tend to feel motivated when the oppertunity presents it self. But I do know that when I writ, I try to open my mind to see things I usually wouldn't...

Danielle Whitted Thursday, March 23rd 2006 at 5:45PM

I am really feelinh this poem. It makes me excited reading it. I know you put a lot of effort into this and it was worth it. The girl you wrote this for or was thinking about when you wrote this should feel like she is the most special woman in the world right now ( cause i know i would). You are a very intelligent man and not afraid to share your emotions with others through a poem. I really like that. Keep doing what you doing cause God has blessed you. Much love

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Trenessa Baker Wednesday, April 19th 2006 at 12:01PM

It was good I write poetry Let me spit u a lil bit

See Not like me
And not like i
But its you in this world of mine
So fine and divine
Livin this black life of mine
Of ghetto strife
but one day im gone be his wife
See not like me
And not like i
ITs you the man of the world
That stand for all our black men

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