I Remember.... Read and tell me what u think!
I remember when I first saw you, for a moment you caught my eye,
you were walkin', I was talkin', and when you passed you said 'Hi',
I remember when we first officially met, it was in the gym during school,
We talked the whole class then on the phone, thats when I realized you were cool,
I remember the long days and nights sitting home and talkin to you, we used to laugh, but that was the past just like everything else we used to do,
I remember the first we had together, it was always painfully good, I knew I shouldnt have done it but it felt just like I should,
I remember when we fell out because you thought you had game, you played around, I wasnt down and you werent actin the same,
I remember the first time I saw you, and when we met officially, I remember our long nights talkin, you said you'd neva leave me,
I remember our time togetha, when we did things I hadnt done yet, I'll always remember when you hurt me, How could I forget?
you were walkin', I was talkin', and when you passed you said 'Hi',
I remember when we first officially met, it was in the gym during school,
We talked the whole class then on the phone, thats when I realized you were cool,
I remember the long days and nights sitting home and talkin to you, we used to laugh, but that was the past just like everything else we used to do,
I remember the first we had together, it was always painfully good, I knew I shouldnt have done it but it felt just like I should,
I remember when we fell out because you thought you had game, you played around, I wasnt down and you werent actin the same,
I remember the first time I saw you, and when we met officially, I remember our long nights talkin, you said you'd neva leave me,
I remember our time togetha, when we did things I hadnt done yet, I'll always remember when you hurt me, How could I forget?
Nice poetry and great to see You exhibit Your Gift.
Hope to see more!